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When a Woman Is Just a Woman

When a woman is just a woman She is heaven and earth when she is in love She is the essence of her man’s world It’s the spirit of fire in her eye Swing of her hips Joy when she walks With romantic candlelight dinners Music and soaking in bubbles With passion Her soft skin and the sweet taste of champagne She’ll make love tenderly to last and last Her sensual kisses and caresses Awakens captivating emotions She'll give you everything she's got Just to make you smile She’s the lullaby and a hero Of her children’s hearts Skinned knees or Nights full of nightmares A mother’s soft, soothing Caress and kiss Makes it fade away She'll show she is not afraid A survivor of her own kind By: 6/1/2015
Battle of the Honorable Mentions - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Richard Lamoureux

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Date: 6/14/2015 2:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your win:) Alexis
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Date: 6/14/2015 6:21:00 AM
Congrats on a wonderful win Eve
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Date: 6/7/2015 12:12:00 AM
Romantic.
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Date: 6/4/2015 7:15:00 PM
Hi Eve, I see you've met my wife. lol This should place well
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Date: 6/4/2015 9:47:00 AM
Perfect!
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Date: 6/4/2015 2:38:00 AM
Hi Eve! You describe the woman that many would like to be a part of....sweet, romantic, seductive, loving, understanding and caring. Luckily they do exist! #7 gl in the contest. // paul
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Date: 6/3/2015 5:40:00 PM
you really did this topic justice here, Eve. WELL DONE.
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Date: 6/3/2015 1:33:00 PM
- A truely magnificent poem, dear Eve - A poem that all women must love :) - Good luck in the contest! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/3/2015 9:23:00 AM
Eve, congrats for being a beautiful woman.. i am seeing you in your lines.. =')~olive eloisa
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Date: 6/2/2015 11:31:00 PM
Fabulous Eve....you've summed up the woman in all her wonderful parts.....Tim
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Date: 6/2/2015 10:54:00 PM
You express the glory of being a woman in the most wonderful, poetic way, Eve! Absolutely beautiful! A 7 from me :)
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Date: 6/2/2015 7:30:00 PM
You paint a beautiful picture Eve...Very sensual and romantic ...Great write...hugs
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Date: 6/2/2015 6:50:00 PM
Eve, coming back to read this beautiful poem and thanks for visiting my poem, Bernard. ..
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Date: 6/2/2015 9:30:00 AM
Lovely, Eve. A woman is all that...indeed. :) She is a wonderful creation. Good luck in the contest. This is Eileen. Hugs
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/2/2015 9:51:00 AM
You amaze me sweet lady, I'm glad you told me this was you. You're the woman God created and so much more. Hugs dear friend
Date: 6/2/2015 8:52:00 AM
Excellent. Very romantic write. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/2/2015 4:29:00 PM
Thank you, Ravi, your "Ohoo, little butterfly " is a beautiful write. Hugs Eve
Date: 6/2/2015 7:50:00 AM
wow, love this, what would we do without them? and indeed your poetry...
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/2/2015 4:31:00 PM
Thank you, Harry, your inspirational word are treasured to motivate me to keep writing :~) hugs
Date: 6/2/2015 7:45:00 AM
This is beautiful!
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/2/2015 4:33:00 PM
Thank you, Anna, your kind comment is inspiring. :~) Hugs eve
Date: 6/2/2015 5:52:00 AM
Eve, this is beautiful, I love your poem and thanks for visiting my poem shameonyou
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/2/2015 4:37:00 PM
B.W. thank you, so much for always supporting me as so many do. Bless you for it
Date: 6/2/2015 1:10:00 AM
You have summed up the ideal woman perfectly Eve - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx 7
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/2/2015 4:34:00 PM
Jan, thank you. I wasn't going to try but I decided I would. You are very inspiring in my life

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