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When a Poet Lose His Words

In your eyes my dear blue oceans ravels and in your hair night get lost Between your lips a poet lose his words and vanquish his thoughts A circulation of a full moon I see in your face and a breeze from God heavens come out from your breaths

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Honestly J.T.

Date: 8/21/2017 11:05:00 PM

very emotional poem; well done -JT

Dalia Shahein
Date: 9/7/2017 8:03:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear /hugs :)

White Sage

Date: 4/16/2017 4:33:00 PM

This is great! actually well worded romanticism, been a bit long I came around here...and it's wonderful that the first poem am reading is this...it's so lovely, an excellent one, best wishes Dalia

Dalia Shahein
Date: 4/17/2017 2:27:00 AM

well you know me i'm addicted to romance ....lol...thank u very much for your sweet words and your lovely visit / :)

Anil Deo

Date: 4/15/2017 2:18:00 PM

So, this is great love poetry, which I have NOT written for a long time. Except Puppy Love for the contest, and I was among the second place finishes with Eve Roper's contest. Do submit to any of Eve Roper's ... they are FREE to enter. U can click & simply add existing poem one contest at a time. Or write a fresh entry. Take care

Dalia Shahein
Date: 4/15/2017 2:26:00 PM

Thank you very much my dear , I will and once again i appreciate your lovely comment and your lovely visit to my poems , hugs / / :) T.C