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When a Man Loves a Woman

Joyous cries then one look in your eyes another beautiful child is born God sprinkled a little fairy dust that memorable early Sunday morn hair of gold, a vision to behold perfect playful smile with a dimple on her cheek eyes open wide, full of passion, and sparkling blue in my image, but incomparable and unique When does a father know? When will his love start to grow? That first time you grasped my finger never wanting to let go The nights I patiently rocked you is where it first began to show All the lullabies and humming songs The way you snuggled in my arms How time was standing still life could do to you no harm. As you got a little older our bond got pretty tight playing games and holding hands praying together every night. I sit here now and smile, remembering all those things we did climbing trees, and water fights I counted while you hid I'm wrapped around your finger would do anything that you choose when you, my angel, graced my world I gained a smile I couldn't lose
09/08/2015

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Date: 9/13/2015 11:25:00 PM
Well as you can see, I haven't been around as much, so all I can say is a pleasure to be able to relax and read such nice poetry!
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Date: 9/13/2015 9:59:00 PM
Tim, Congratulations on your wonderful win. LOVE SKAT
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Date: 9/12/2015 4:48:00 AM
Tim congratulations on your beautiful write. I knew when I read it, it was a winner!
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Date: 9/11/2015 10:56:00 PM
Superb take with this awesome romantic Tim! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 9/9/2015 6:03:00 PM
Exquisite like always, Tim , Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/9/2015 3:36:00 PM
Fabulous! How awesome this is..and what a joyful feeling it transmits...Another fav.
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Date: 9/9/2015 3:40:00 PM
Thanks Charma. I bet you have the same feeling with Christina. Have a beautiful night. : )
Date: 9/9/2015 2:48:00 AM
Excellent. Very loving emotional write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 9/9/2015 12:22:00 PM
Thank you Ravi
Date: 9/8/2015 6:01:00 PM
The flow of your write depict the beauty within. Am in awe of your pen. A well and excellent constructed.....smile.......A.M.
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Date: 9/8/2015 7:26:00 PM
Thanks A.M. My little girl always brings a smile.
Date: 9/8/2015 5:38:00 PM
What an excellent rendition of loving emotions, Tim! You express the feelings in simple yet beautiful poetic lines. #7+ Thank you for reminding me of Percy Sledge and his lovely song...I'll go check it out...it's been some time since I last heard it! // paul
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Tim Smith
Date: 9/8/2015 7:26:00 PM
Thanks Paul
Date: 9/8/2015 1:47:00 PM
- What a glorious poem, Tim !!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/8/2015 3:45:00 PM
Thank you A-L
Date: 9/8/2015 1:30:00 PM
that is so sweet Tim, I remember this feeling. Oh, well true love always holds flames. To have him wrapped around my finger again, takes so much energy.. LOL... JK... I love this poem,... LINDA
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Tim Smith
Date: 9/8/2015 3:44:00 PM
Thanks Linda. Yes it takes a lot of energy but it is worth it.
Date: 9/8/2015 12:38:00 PM
This is so sweet and endearing. Your daughter is lucky to have such a loving father.
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Date: 9/8/2015 12:53:00 PM
Thank you very much Heather.
Date: 9/8/2015 12:02:00 PM
Simply perfect Tim you should print this out and frame it:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tim Smith
Date: 9/8/2015 12:08:00 PM
Thanks Jan. Maybe I'll save it for a birthday present. : )

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