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When a Dream Remains a Dream

When a dream remains a dream it’s like I dived into the depths of the sea, onto the corals down there to engrave my name but the bottom was too deep and my breath too short and I got bogged up on the surface. When a dream remains a dream it’s like it drizzled a scent of rain but the cloud was soon scattered away - what a time for the weather to get fine again! – and I only drank a spell of drought! When a dream remains a dream it’s like a shore of stars I endeavoured to colour in the hues of joy but the night, that wild eagle dashed upon me and I was left with the shards of a fractured look. I remember, though, a dream I climbed upon only to find trodden mud and a hope withering flake by flake. Oh, when a dream remains a dream it’s like a poem of mine that I had kept in the drawers of time, but it got caught into the venomous hooks of fake needs and got lost or so I think.

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Date: 8/8/2014 7:40:00 PM
Very interesting one revealing some deep thoughts. I hope none of your poems will get lost. They sustain us, all those poems we write!! I would hate to lose mine.
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