When

"When" “When” When we dream And when we love Is there anything Above When we begin In our dreams In our past We can try and make this last Change is one way of bravery But Deep inside theirs a child Still afraid Learning to crawl Take down the walls Be proud.

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Peter Kiggin

Date: 4/15/2014 4:56:00 AM

We think we can control ourselves but we are just like the past and the future unboundless

Richard Rosen

Date: 4/9/2014 3:43:00 PM

Courtney, There is not only an inner child deep inside, this poem reveals an inner strength "Learning to crawl, Take down the walls, Be Proud." Another poem ending in hope. Richard

Justin Bordner

Date: 4/9/2014 2:26:00 PM

I like the desire of your dream. J.A.B.

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 4/8/2014 11:20:00 AM

You speak from your heart...its in your work! :)