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When the arguing, shouting, fighting is done bullets remain, put down the gun. Nobody is dying Nobody dead. The wounds remain in the head. Flashbacks occur silent instead, as I lay breathing in your bed. Nobody is dying Nobody dead I tell myself in my head. The mind is wonderful a true delight Suspision lies in wait to give a fright If caught you stumble and fall to the ground, dark and murky is where suspicion lies. Suspicion lies in the abuse of trust and forever remains the DEVILS DUST

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/27/2009 1:37:00 PM
Very good, welcome to the soup. Keep writing.
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Date: 8/18/2009 4:50:00 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Jackie. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/18/2009 4:04:00 PM
Interesting. Sara
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