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Scooters, a likely good investment in manufacturers.

Oh, Scooter, savior of my leg joints. The bearer of my weight. Reducer of pain. You carry me, three-wheeled chariot, as a knight on his steed. My sword cane, my concealed lance. From my vehicle to a place of sustenance. grocery store, or restaurant. To places of examination. Modern alchemists. Modern soothsayers. Analyzing the "humors," with scientific precision. Oh, Scooter. Slyly, you enslave me. As I rise, my legs flare with pain. Like withdrawal from addiction, my brain craves that which relieves misery. Oh, to stay on your padded seat. My geriatric throne. The addiction waxes stronger. Being without you, increases my hunger. Finally, I cease to be mobile, on my own. My medical condition, from sedentary living, takes its toll. And my organs silently whisper, "Nevermore." Soon the wheels that carry me, are in a procession to a place, where I will need you, never again.

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Date: 12/3/2018 4:08:00 AM
scooter- makes you slave! /// Oh! my sadly friend the bike is; the bone and marrow with no in same place although/// lovely writing
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Kieran Pavlick
Date: 12/4/2018 6:25:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 12/2/2018 2:46:00 PM
Kieran, I love your tongue-in-cheek approach in this witty poem. Laughed out loud at the "geriatric throne" line. Hope you have a wonderful holiday season! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Kieran Pavlick
Date: 12/4/2018 6:27:00 PM
And you also, Carolyn. My wife now deceased, was from Chard Somerset.

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