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What's Wrong With You My Heart

What's wrong with you my heart ? Why do you feel this chill ? You sounds like someone shoot you with a dart , you look like you've seen hell... What's wrong with you my heart ? Why your so cold ? Just begin with a new start , come on let me give you a hold... Please your freezing me up , I feel a major pain... Please make your storm stop , your driving me insane... What's wrong with you my heart ? Why your killing me from deep inside ? Just grab your broken parts , for a minute think of me and forget your pride..

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White Sage

Date: 2/16/2016 1:55:00 PM

this is an extraordinary write, you made the expressions in such a perfect way...excellent you Dalia

Dalia Shahein
Date: 2/21/2016 8:40:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear for ur lovely comment, hugs / / :)

Justin Bordner

Date: 12/18/2015 3:24:00 AM

When we love someone they do move in to the very muscle of our heart, and when our heart begins to strain, murmur, and quiet we wonder if we are dying Dalia...your poem is your heart, and also the one you love, I want to keep your heart strong, and more beautiful than it even knows it can be. You have me emotionally, I want to protect you from sorrow my Violet Poetess...J.A.B.

Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/18/2015 6:20:00 AM

Thank you very much my dear friend for ur sweet sweet and lovely comment I appreciate your support and ur delightful words as I do appreciate ur wonderful feedback...I'm glad u liked it...hugs / / :D