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What's Wrong With Me

You must not have missed seeing the sun any day, How he attains his zenith in the same old way. Yes, he dies by the end of the day, But returns with equal spirit the very next day. Moon is appealing to eyes of all, Vanishes to nothing from the shape of a ball. Grows again from nothing at all, Saying me, “Rise up after every fall.” Let’s look on earth here around, Consider the little seed – either oval or round. Works real hard from the day it’s found, Saying me, “Way to reach the sky starts on the ground.” What’s wrong with me, How they rise again, can’t I see? Be they the sun, the moon or even the tree, Each says, “Good things don’t come for free.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/29/2016 10:18:00 AM
Ali, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 3/29/2016 10:02:00 AM
I like your contrast of death and life renewed, and idea of big things arising from small packages.
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