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What's the point?

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What's the point?

What’s the point 
in living
When death awaits
What’s the point 
in breathing
When you can not 
feel the 
swelling of your 
What’s the point 
in love
When you heart 
only aches
What’s the point 
of being in a 
state of 
When you are not 
really alive
What’s the point 
in doing your 
When it is 
What’s the point 
in making all 
When you are sad
What’s the point 
in smiling 
When your heart 
And that colgate 
never touches 
your eyes
What’s the point
in anything?

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  1. Date: 8/7/2010 4:46:00 AM
    Intereting write about sadness and depression..Sara

  1. Date: 7/24/2010 12:35:00 PM
    I think that the line "What's the point" to introduce each section becomes a little redundant. Also, some line breaks would help. I did especially like "And that colgate smile never touches your eyes"