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Am about to enter into the realm of fear Am about to enter a cave, it's not clear Am about to lose it all, my gear It's dark, darker than I envisioned, no premier Stranger, unknown danger, where is my spear? Longer mines that may end into unknown sphere With circumstances that may end up severe Am sitting here wondering if this thing will sheer.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/27/2015 9:20:00 AM
Each time we step into the unknown we expand our world and our possibilities.
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/29/2015 4:51:00 AM
That's a smart way of looking at it.thank you Rick.
Date: 3/27/2015 4:22:00 AM
Great yarn.
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/29/2015 4:47:00 AM
Hannington, Thank you for your comment
Date: 3/27/2015 3:54:00 AM
It's a product of the mind. Nice Pen, Njeri. Love it! Hugs, always Amor.
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/29/2015 4:46:00 AM
That's true it's a product of the mind. Thank you Amor.
Date: 3/27/2015 3:50:00 AM
- The unknown often feels frightening - Take care of yourself - A deep write, dear Njeri - I wish you a beautiful weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/29/2015 4:45:00 AM
Thank you Anne Lise for your kind words. Be blessed.

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