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Concealed behind a congenial mask, hidden hurts levy a terrible toll. And to feel one fleeting moment of peace, I must defile both my body and soul. Cringing all alone, wiping away tears, I exonerate the cold edge of steel. And lingering on the fringes of fear, guilt admonishes me for how I feel. Shards of insanity cut into flesh, and my inhibitions begin to fade. For anticipating instant relief; my inner need soon empowers the blade. With a keen awareness of each heartbeat, I watch the drops of crimson flee my vein. And anxiety slows its throbbing pulse as the blood takes away my greater pain. A feeling of reclamation follows as I crawl into what's left of my heart. And drowning my hurt in its scarlet pool, I gather each piece as it falls apart. (Quatrain) 2/16/2016

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Date: 5/26/2018 7:50:00 PM
Love these lines "For to feel one fleeting moment of peace I must sacrifice both body and soul", Emile.
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Date: 5/27/2018 7:53:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/16/2016 2:51:00 PM
Very powerful! I certainly hope there is hope in there.....somewhere.
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Date: 2/17/2016 10:11:00 AM
Thanks Jeannie, like Jello there is always room for hope, I appreciate your visit. Emile.
Date: 2/16/2016 11:27:00 AM
Emile, you real touched my emotions :'( the suffering of so many that they feel this would be better just hurts. You have captured the pain to show emotion !!
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Date: 2/16/2016 11:44:00 AM
Thanks Eve, your comments are sensitive and appreciated. Emile.
Date: 2/16/2016 11:01:00 AM
Emile..very sad and deep poem..I hope this is fiction, if not, I pray your pain goes away..-luloo
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Date: 2/16/2016 11:43:00 AM
Thanks Laura, like most of my poems I express empathy through my words, but they remain fiction nonetheless. Emile.

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