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What's Important

Is the title an answer or question. Or merely a posing suggestion. From where I stand, I never can tell. If I should whisper or if I should yell. Is there reason enough to continue? Is the news new enough to be new? What's important is that we're alive. And that we continue to strive. But what can we hope to attain? When we dig deep inside of our brain. And the best we can find is a mind. That is full of what we left behind. Well when today is all that there is. Just sloe down with a little gin fizz. For there's really not much that is pressing. And let's face it, for the most part we're guessing.

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Date: 2/7/2015 11:26:00 AM
A wandering spirit that dreams of wings to fly away from the mundane and step outside the box to feel alive again. Emile. #7
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Date: 10/25/2014 8:18:00 AM
Yes it is a guessing game.. a guessing game of choices. Another pensive write than is thought provoking. Enjoyed this and will ponder on it's message more...
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Date: 10/24/2014 6:02:00 PM
A very thought provoking write, this one. I especially loved the way you bantered back and forth about the title... gave me pause. What's important is finding all the paths to importance :)
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Date: 10/18/2014 9:54:00 AM
Lots of truth in this one, my friend. Sorry I missed it the other day. I think I am caught up with your work now!! Gotta get going to the gym. See ya later!!
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Robert Johnson
Date: 10/18/2014 12:05:00 PM
Do a jumping jack for me eh? :)
Date: 10/16/2014 6:50:00 PM
ha! this one had me smiling, especially the "sloe down" line - you are a very clever one, robert! fabulous rhyme and such a smooth, silky flow - bravo!
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Date: 10/16/2014 12:10:00 PM
I love this one, And for the most part we're guessing" :) eve Robert thank you for reading one of my writes, but surprises me you read the one no one has comment, thank you for you comment
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