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What's Deep Inside

Her face Corrodes in time Leaving pieces To flake on the surface But deep inside her hurt face Lies sharp shards Russell Sivey Form Vignette

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Rollo West

Date: 12/8/2012 3:23:00 PM

Hi Russell, this a great write my friend, very deep in thought. Rollo

Jacob Cra

Date: 12/8/2012 1:18:00 PM

Simple but so stellar.Wow, this poem is spectacular, by far one of my favorites I have ever read (and I'm not just saying that). Is it published or what? It's really good, and you are extremely talented... I've read some of your other poems as well. You should visit my site: poeticpossibilities.tk ! I think this poem could have a really good chance of winning one of our contests! Wish you the best with your poetry and I hope you get published! : )Jacob Cramer

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/8/2012 11:59:00 AM

Very serious work..Is it about a person or maybe a work of art like a statue?Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Your kind reviews are appreciated..Sara

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/8/2012 11:39:00 AM

Beauty on the inside never ages.... well written my fried.... Michael