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What's a Good Man

A good man protect his woman from the cold world Make love to her soul like a river flowing to the heavens A good man simulate his lady mind A good man dig deep inside her soul treat his first love his mother like a queen A good man is like a smooth piece of chocolate that melt in his lady mouth that will leave A passionate after taste that will live a mark in her heart A good man will hold his woman so tight it would leave foot prints across the chest like a memory A good man will treasure his lady before his fellow men What's a good man you may ask A good man will make sure lover needs will be accomplish & pleased

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Date: 11/25/2016 8:45:00 AM
Hi Patrice, Congrats on your win. It was well deserved. :-) Alexis
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Patrice Trice Jackson
Date: 11/25/2016 9:35:00 AM
Thank you Alexis... I really appreciate you response...
Date: 11/24/2016 11:13:00 PM
Yes! This is definitely a good man! "Like a smooth piece of chocolate" :) I love this. Congratulations on your win!
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Patrice Trice Jackson
Date: 11/25/2016 12:02:00 AM
Hello Rebecca thank you for your response.... I really appreciate you for taking the time out for reading my poetry...
Date: 11/24/2016 9:09:00 PM
Congratulations Patrice, this is an honest poem with real thoughts, a great write.
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Date: 11/2/2016 9:16:00 PM
WoW! That is most definitely a good man. It would be a blessing to meet a man like you described. Well done. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Patrice Trice Jackson
Date: 11/2/2016 11:17:00 PM
Thank you so much Alexis for your input it was very appreciate sorry for just responding. I just realize how to. LOL

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