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Was it fun? Did it give you kicks? Did you get pleasure from it? From breaking my heart Lets review. Alex: You were so clingy when I first met you. You acted so friendly, So I finally decide to be nice to you, You ask me out, I said yes, You met HIM, And tore my heart, stomping it like it was nothing. How am I the *******? David: You back stabbing lowlife punk. Just when I thought you couldn't go any lower, You turn around and do this to me. Hmm. I got it! Let play a game Give me some of your blood. We'll take a blood test. I'm sure it'll prove false. So you both can go on living happy lives. I don't this from either of you anymore.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/26/2008 9:30:00 PM
Sure but only on PoetrySoup and please write on my third poem cause my computer is a piece of . . . . . . . . . . . . . i wuv u! :)
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Date: 11/26/2008 6:20:00 PM
Hey wats up dude can you talk?
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Date: 9/29/2008 8:39:00 AM
I am sorry you have been hurt, some people are just inconsiderate of other people's feelings. I hope you feel better soon, Take care, Lee
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Date: 9/28/2008 1:48:00 PM
Wats up it looks like you've got a friend who s me just like you do...
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Date: 9/26/2008 1:24:00 PM
HELL YEAH DUDE!!!! i know exactly what you are/were goin through. it will get better though. AWESOME!!! poem
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Date: 9/23/2008 7:58:00 PM
I'm RRRRREEEEEAAAAALLLLLLLLLLYYYYYYYY SORRY...... I'm crying hysterically....... I still love you like a awesome brother.......I SERIOUSLY didn't want it to end like this...... I'M SOOOOOOOO SORRY....... I didn't want to break your heart ever!!!!!! PLEASE FORGIVE ME????!!!!!
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Date: 9/13/2008 4:11:00 PM
i love you......you're soooooo y!!!!!!
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Date: 9/13/2008 1:04:00 PM
what is your deal dude i didn't steal her from you!
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Date: 9/12/2008 8:15:00 PM
i will.....maybe.....goodnight......
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Date: 9/12/2008 8:04:00 PM
hey, we still friends??!!
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Date: 9/12/2008 7:59:00 PM
i will always love yu no matter wat??!!
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Date: 9/12/2008 7:55:00 PM
I LOVE YOU DUMBASS!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 9/12/2008 7:53:00 PM
you're not a freak and even if you are you're my freak.... i love you
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Date: 9/12/2008 7:50:00 PM
don't cry.....i still and will always love you no matter what happens, i promise you
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Date: 9/12/2008 7:44:00 PM
why are you bein this way??!!
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Date: 9/12/2008 7:40:00 PM
YOU!!
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Date: 9/12/2008 7:34:00 PM
good poem.......im sorry i think i might as well just end it all right now thank you for lettin me know this......
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