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What You Gave

What you gave was the humility lost now in the starry universe, dark and gray about to rain. A circle of stars shuttering in place, shifting from season to space, dancing in darkness. What you gave were these arms to reach out and hold the world close in an ever changing way, buoyant and feisty, or ready to give up. What you gave will always be alive breathing into the surfaces of the universe.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/14/2014 1:33:00 PM
Lovely write, Julie. Congratulations on your placement.
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Date: 7/14/2014 9:03:00 AM
This is lovely, Julie! A lot has been given here, and I believe nothing is expected in return. Congrats on a fine win. // paul
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