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What Would It Be Like

What would it be like to love you To know much more than just your name Your poetic lines are heart magnets Thoughts of you are driving me insane What would it be like to hold you I’d like to dance beneath the moon And feel your breath upon my neck Look in your eyes and be consumed What would it be like to kiss you Do I even dare to ponder here Could lips ignite what once was lost Would doubts fly when you come near What would it be like to tell you All these things and a thousand more Should I risk this poetic friendship And boldly knock upon your door -Lyric Man Note: The writer is in a fun, romantic, risk taking mood today (so watch out). Ever wonder how close a particular poet is to the perception you've created in your mind. Does poetic chemistry transfer into real life? Do you believe its possible??

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Date: 7/6/2019 4:44:00 PM
Congratulations on potd Dave.I love this sweet wistful poem...Romantic as ever
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Date: 6/25/2019 8:49:00 AM
This is fun and playful.
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Date: 6/24/2019 9:55:00 PM
glad you're back , dave!...and with a potd to boot; go and get the girl; you rule!... huggs
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Date: 6/20/2019 1:01:00 AM
Belated Congratulations on POTD Lyric Man great write
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Date: 6/11/2019 8:53:00 AM
Mr Romantic...Congratulations Lyric Man...A lovely write indeed...
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Date: 6/10/2019 11:07:00 PM
You paint an amazing picture. I’d like to think that the sparks would ignite into something more.
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Date: 6/10/2019 11:01:00 AM
Awesome write, Lyric Man. Congrats on POTD! ~Mark
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Date: 6/10/2019 8:50:00 AM
What would it be like? We all must have asked these questions to ourselves before. Good things can happen when we find the courage to say them to the ones we adore. Great write Lyric Man. Belated congrats on POTD with this gem. ~Charlie
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Date: 6/10/2019 7:20:00 AM
- A wonderful p.o.t.d., L.M. :) - Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/9/2019 10:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful and well-deserved POTD honors with this thought provoking and beautifully expressed Lyric, Lyric Man. It's so nice to see you here taking your turn. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/9/2019 7:15:00 PM
Knowing someone, is to TRULY and DEEPLY know them- through moments shared, emotions felt. Through Words, even if distance separates them. It is possible to feel someone, to connect without ever meeting. Your thoughts move me. Congratulations Lyric Man, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Date: 6/9/2019 3:27:00 PM
A fine penned piece LM, whether you take the chance on meeting this person, well I think you've got to be careful, be very sure. Congrats on being POTD.
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Date: 6/9/2019 1:55:00 PM
Nice to see you Dave, congrats on POTD. Tom
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Date: 6/9/2019 12:42:00 PM
Hello my friend congratulations on POTD.. Hugs
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Date: 6/9/2019 12:15:00 PM
Lyric Man, first congratulations on POTD, and very deserving too. Your poem is awesome, I could really feel like you were speaking right to me with your written words, it was very emotional And I do think the chemistry between poets transfers into real life, how could it not ~ A FAV for me !
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Date: 6/9/2019 11:34:00 AM
A wonderful poem Lyric man with endless possibilities - congratulations on POTD, a thought provoking poem! Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/9/2019 11:26:00 AM
Many congrats on POTD LM:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/9/2019 9:30:00 AM
Hi Lyric, Good poem and content. Anything is possible however I share Jan's views on the matter. Congrats on getting the poem of the day:-) Alexis
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Date: 6/9/2019 7:59:00 AM
Que Sera Sera, Lyric Man...we only have one life to live...Congrats!! on POTD!!...great lyric...^WW^
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Date: 6/9/2019 7:37:00 AM
To never risk often means to never grow, I say do it! Congratulations on your POTD for this beautiful write !!
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Date: 6/9/2019 6:26:00 AM
A beautiful poem of longing that even Browning would be affected by the sheer simplicity of poetic expressions. Congrats on POTD, well deserved.
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Date: 6/9/2019 4:27:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD with this well deserved gem, if it's not fiction I say go for it!
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Date: 6/9/2019 3:37:00 AM
I know of two poets, friends of mine who met at a poetry club and married and she moved to his country. It has been over fifteen years and they are still happy.; ) Congratulations on your POTD honors!
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Date: 6/7/2019 8:43:00 PM
G'day Lyric Man … the first steps to romance if all the stars line up. Certainly a pleasant lyric and nicely written - thank you Lyric Man - Lindsay
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Date: 6/7/2019 5:05:00 PM
It certainly does happen LM do you remember James and Olive Eliosa - now married with a 'souper' baby:-) ... and then of course there are those who fantasise I wont dare breathe her name lol:-) I will always hide behind my avatar so day dream away lol , its so good to see another gem from your pen:-) hugs jan xx
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