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What Went Wrong

What went wrong? We used to be the happiest family We used to be the model in our society We used to be the champion in every way We used to be… I remember the day you came From our province with that face So sad, so bad and so on fire And chili suddenly hit your eyes What went wrong? You suddenly talks so bad Your smile’s so dry, so empty Your colorful words no longer in use Your sweetness turned to bitterness What went wrong? I beg you, at least talk Tell us, give us hint That we can help, I know we can ‘cause blood is always thicker than water I beg you, What went wrong? I miss your songs I miss you smile I miss the real you I miss those blissful days So Please! you must talk

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Date: 8/7/2019 4:31:00 PM
A poem that has deep roots. Genuinely- precise.
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