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What the Wind Is Doing

It's rocking an empty flowerpot perched in a pine tree: 'RockABye Baby in the High Top,' its contents shell shocked in this February of zero wind chill. It's the heart's empty nest, cold ripple of a lake that threatens to overtake, were it not for higher ground. We've wind from the northeast, sharp and heartless, harbinger of storms, but I am Barrier Island, formed by one who taught me by salt, sea- shell, and the sting of sand, bitter winter spray in remembered summer. Land bound, one learns to light where something shores us. So here am I , despite trade winds, the Skull and Bones of picturesque pirates, failed story tales where even the wind lies. In the lake one small duck, sustained by its currents paddles my direction, drawn by intuition or design of a kindred spirit who would sail, dive with delight, endure the cold solitude of seagulls at evening, seeking harbor far from their ocean. They are white flags signaling Yes, You will find your heaven.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/27/2009 9:34:00 AM
Interesting reflection. Good use of imagery. Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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Date: 9/24/2009 2:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round Nola.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/24/2009 1:26:00 PM
Dear Nola, Congratulations on getting through the first round of the poetry contest with your great verse! Luck and love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/24/2009 12:30:00 PM
Nola, congratulations in getting past round one of the competition >> James
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Date: 9/23/2009 6:41:00 AM
"It's the heart's empty nest." Yes! Congrats on this selection my dear friend. B IG LOVE, daver
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Date: 9/23/2009 6:32:00 AM
one learns to light where something shores us. Love this line. congratulations on this well deserved feature of the week. Lainie
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Date: 9/22/2009 7:56:00 PM
Nola, congrats on your feature this week...Raul
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Date: 9/22/2009 6:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week Nola >>James
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Date: 9/21/2009 4:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)
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Date: 9/21/2009 6:11:00 AM
wonderfull... this is going to my favourite for further reading. Congrats on your poetry being featured this week… please keep writing… great you Nola! Adeleke
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Date: 9/21/2009 3:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Nola. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/29/2009 2:01:00 PM
"Land bound, one learns to light where something shores you. So I am here, despite trade winds, the Skull & Bones of picturesque pirates, failed story tales in which even the wind lies..." This piece of writing, in my mind, put your poetry into a whole other gear...
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Date: 2/21/2009 9:48:00 AM
My God, Nola, everyone should be reading you! I'm the kind who searches high and low for talent. You got it, kid! I love the sea gull ending, sea gulls being my favorite birds. They are the complete bird....swim or fly, equally at home. Cold solitude, yes. LOve, daver
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