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I don't know where to start, but I need to find the words
To describe something of beauty, that surely needs to be heard

If heard is not what they are, then these words must surely be read
For these words are written with heart, either way my words are said

You must all be asking, what these words are all about
If I was atop of Hacha Grande, these words written I would shout

These words are written about beauty, amidst the clothes she wears
It's about a Spanish maiden, what she wears, I can only stare

No matter the colours, be they vibrant, dark or others
Either way they cloak my eyes, so radiant in perfect smother 

Captured within her aura, dark locks in appearance blend
Entranced are my eyes forever, for my mind my views do send

To describe something of beauty, that surely needs to be heard
My eyes can only be truthful, to see her, I'm never blurred

I don't know where to start, but I need to find the words To describe something of beauty, that surely needs to be heard If heard is not what they are, then these words must surely be read For these words are written with heart, either way my words are said You must all be asking, what these words are all about If I was atop of Hacha Grande, these words written I would shout These words are written about beauty, amidst the clothes she wears It's about a Spanish maiden, what she wears, I can only stare No matter the colours, be they vibrant, dark or others Either way they cloak my eyes, so radiant in perfect smother Captured within her aura, dark locks in appearance blend Entranced are my eyes forever, for my mind my views do send To describe something of beauty, that surely needs to be heard My eyes can only be truthful, to see her, I'm never blurred *~*

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/4/2012 3:58:00 AM
Bravo!! Excellent!! Lovely!!
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Date: 4/15/2012 7:20:00 AM
Wow ! Your vision sounds! What a wonderful thought this spring dear poet, I can only imagine the radiance which you are taking in ! Wonderful words James ! Much love, james
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Date: 4/14/2012 12:57:00 AM
very sweet words. im glad you shared this one. we should all have a poem like this about us :-)
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Date: 4/13/2012 4:36:00 PM
You're seeing her very closely it seems ..lol.. Soon be getting blurred visions indeed.. smiles :) Sweet lovely poem James
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Date: 4/13/2012 3:05:00 PM
This poem really made me smile.. Thanks for sharing James..- Diana
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Date: 4/13/2012 12:41:00 PM
Yes, James...this words comes from heart, beautifull written. Have a lovely weekend to you. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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