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What My Eyes Show Me

I am afraid of what my eyes show me They show me violence instead of peace But true love is what i wish to see They trick me They deceive me In relationships they blind me They make my heart stone Because of them, to me real love is unknown I try not to love what my eyes see Because later i realize it's not what it use to be I try to follow my heart and what it feels But these deceiving eyes store feelings using a tight seal Tomorrow will be longer, but my heart will grow stronger And it'll someday be free, but until that day I am afraid of what my eyes show me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/6/2012 5:52:00 AM
This is explicitly awesome. I love the piece so much and I think I will be checking on your other wonderful works... Its a blessing coming to your page and I hope you do well to stop by too. Once again, nice work.
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Ashley Renee
Date: 6/6/2012 9:57:00 AM
Thank you! Im glad you liked it and i sure will stop by you page.
Date: 6/3/2012 10:55:00 PM
This is deeply spoken!! Enjoyed!
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Ashley Renee
Date: 6/4/2012 9:43:00 PM
Thank you very much, Im glad you liked it.
Date: 6/3/2012 10:33:00 AM
" Very Heartfelt Moment, Cause The Eye's Do Decieve And Blind You, When You Don't Know What Life Can Throw Back At You.. Great Write. Carma"
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Ashley Renee
Date: 6/4/2012 9:44:00 PM
So true, thank you for your comment.
Date: 6/3/2012 1:40:00 AM
Ashley - I can very much relate to your poem. Your heart does gain strength that I can assure you! Well done - Shaz
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Ashley Renee
Date: 6/4/2012 9:48:00 PM
thank you for your comment. :)

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