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What Makes Women So Beautiful

What is it that make women so beautiful Is it their eyes, their personality, their smile Their alluring soft and mellow voice That whispers let's talk for a while Intelligence is definitely a very big factor Coz when the loving's all done Need to discuss the happenings of the day And the recent soap opera fun Love is much more that a roll in the hay To last, it needs friendship as well So hard to love someone if liking's not part It's really quite easy to tell So what is it that make women so beautiful Those things and a whole lot more That overwhelming totally feminine thing The beauty that all men adore © Jack Ellison 2014

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Date: 3/1/2014 7:56:00 AM
Yeah, lol, what Charmaine said. Nice write, Jack. Thoughts are as nice. :D Cyndi
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Date: 3/1/2014 8:06:00 AM
Charmaine sure knows how to say it, eh!... Canadian, eh!!! LOL Loving frigid hugs... Jack XOX
Date: 2/28/2014 3:32:00 PM
Yes beauty is important..and Its not collagen that defines beauty.You are a wise man who knows better..As you stated above its in the eyes..I guess eyes can offer compassion..Its in the smile..Smile can offer warmth.Its in personality-Its important yes to have an easy going and strong yet kind character.Its in the brains..Yes no man likes a woman who speaks only of make up and hairstyle I guess.Its nice and wise when a man mentions this stuff which makes a female shine.Hundred points for you : )
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Date: 2/28/2014 4:21:00 PM
WHOOOOA!!! I will treasure these comments, my dear sweet Charmaine! Thank you so so much for your charming words that add beautifully to mine! YOU ARE BEAUTIFUL!!! Loving hugs my dearest Charmaine, your always friend, Jack XOX
Date: 2/28/2014 1:11:00 PM
you got 'em all correct, Jack!!! ..very well expressed...you are really a man of a beautiful woman...:')) ..^__^
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Date: 2/28/2014 1:17:00 PM
WOW... all correct! LOL Thank you my sweet friend! Loving hugs, Jack XOX
Date: 2/28/2014 8:25:00 AM
Ah....beauty....I so wish I were drop dead gorgeous....Of course, inner beauty is key....but outer beauty has it's own charm as well.....kenny...most men don't give a hoot for a women's brains...they want Betty Crocker in the kitchen and a sex kitten in the bedroom....Hmmmmm...thanks for including the mind in this whole write. HUGS
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Date: 2/28/2014 8:49:00 AM
Drop dead gorgeous is how you feel and if you think you are, you are... and others will think so too! I have forever had an image problem but I've come to realize people love you for who you are inside!!! Lots of love, Kenny xox
Date: 2/28/2014 8:25:00 AM
Wow a hearwarming charming poem for feminine pride n apreciation. As a lassie myself, i found dis enthusing to read in flow n meter. Great to read u again.
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Date: 2/28/2014 8:50:00 AM
Your are sweet, my dear! Thank you... loving hugs, Jack XOX
Date: 2/28/2014 8:18:00 AM
Dragon runs around all day long and gets boo boo's once in a while... And what makes Mama beautiful to him... is when I fix them with a boo boo kiss to make it go away... and a Mama's loving smile! Thank goodness he's not a teenager for problems are bigger and harder to go away... But for now my little Dragon sings his Mama's praise.
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Date: 2/28/2014 8:42:00 AM
You ACTUALLY KISS Dragon... eeew! But NOT on the lips though, RIGHT! Do Dragons have voluptuous lips??? LOL XOXOX
Date: 2/28/2014 6:59:00 AM
Yes, we men sure do love the allure of a woman's grasp and tender heart! Her beauty is always beyond compare, I love looking at a good looking woman, but to view her heart is the key! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem here this morning my friend! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/28/2014 7:04:00 AM
You and me, my friend, are chugging down the same track! Have a great day!

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