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What Loving Allah

The sound of throttled fury, The ricocheting of muffled guns… Creeds forced down the unpracticed cords, Swallow or face a close-range shot. Success from some, Failure from the others… Blown skulls and splattered blood, Take responsibility and bathe In the bloodied glory… Now, what use are your creeds? Tell, which loving Allah is so inclement? Perhaps he eats human bodies, I surmise, he could be a carnivore!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/28/2015 9:20:00 PM
Loved the use of language here, very onomatopoeic. 'Blown skulls and and splattered blood' powerful imagery. Peace my friend, Shane
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Date: 4/1/2015 7:20:00 PM
I enjoyed this controversial write!
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Date: 2/4/2015 12:27:00 AM
My friend... is it the God who inflicts pain and torture upon others or mere humans... he has created this world with both good and evil, and those who can surpass the evil is successful and the rest will suffer... no God decrees to perform dirty creeds, its the wayward and senseless humans who does them in the name of God... Glory be to him who is falsely accused for our mistakes.' but I must mention this is a good poem, if not for insulting the creator... be blessed.
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Hannington Mumo
Date: 2/4/2015 2:14:00 AM
It targets terrorists who fake to kill for Islam while the fact is that they kill for Satan.

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