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What Love's Pain Looks Like

Do you want to see? What love’s pain looks like? Wait, I will hold my heart out In plain sight See the wounds that she caused by rejection? See the holes from the lack of her affection See the rents caused by my depression Because of rips from her adulterous confession The slashes from her harsh words she said And the bits hacked off from the jealousy in my head There you can see, I tried to patch it up with tears Only to sever my hear again with “How can I live without you fear” Friends tried with consoling words to heal my pain She just tramples my heart and mashes up my brain Do you to see What love’s pain looks like? I hold my heart out It is attached to a spike

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/10/2010 9:12:00 PM
Brilliant. Are you an artist or a free-thinker? Cuz you've got talent and i see the emotions spread out in front of me like a blanket. Nicely done!
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Date: 11/9/2010 7:42:00 PM
you have painted all aspects of love very beautifully,friend.
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Date: 11/9/2010 8:39:00 AM
Hey Sid, hang in there....you will get through it!! You will be better than before!
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Date: 11/7/2010 10:27:00 AM
Smile ~ Keep dipping into the treasures beautiful oils of, "Your Beautiful Soul" my friend; "Silver & Gold" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day 'Dear, Precious Sydney Hall,' Amid The Sanguine Beating Hearts Melodies of, 'Everlastings Beautiful Love;' Bye My Friend!":) ~
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Date: 11/7/2010 10:18:00 AM
Smile? ~ Very deeply emotional & expressed portrait of loves heart "My 'Dear Precious & Gifted Friend, Sydney Hall!!!'" ~ The pain & pangs of a love lost can be very sorrowful indeed my friend but, All things have their reasons within this life of ours; the Sculptors hands molding these masterpieces of times one day...."Beautifully Bittersweet" ~ I hope that life is treating "Your Pricelessness" better & more warmly this day &, "Thank You" for the com; very kind ~ ....Cont:)
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Date: 11/6/2010 3:07:00 AM
Ooooh, this is so sad..... I'm very sorry for what you're going through if this is somewhat of a bio. You make the reader feel the wretched pain you are enduring. Best wishes to you.
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Date: 11/5/2010 11:34:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today, very creative and illustrates your deeper feelings. I believe quite a majority of people have been in this place before...You grow from it though. I hope to read more from you soon. -Matthan
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Date: 11/5/2010 8:17:00 AM
Surely, Sydney, wounds of rejection are holes, rents .... effectively you have worded the pangs of love
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Date: 11/5/2010 4:25:00 AM
*hugs* I know words wont do the trick now.. love you :) Wilma
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Date: 11/4/2010 9:05:00 PM
thanks for the comment glad someone else knows how i feel
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