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What Love Does

When love hits you like a glue, You don't know what to do. Even if something is fake, You think it's true. You don't have a break, But rather go through. You know what it takes? It makes you a fool. It's like being drowned in a lake; But not a pool. It's a moment to celebrate: That's why it takes two. A lot of words to exchange, That's me and you. Count one to eight,and it got you. The words of the gate:"I love you".

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/16/2016 2:36:00 PM
Janix, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 7/16/2011 1:22:00 PM
Very creative piece with nice rhythmic expressions, Janix
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Date: 7/16/2011 1:58:00 PM
THANKS DOC

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