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What Kind of Flowers

Getting close to eighty, not a great idea To shovel snow anymore The danger of a heart attack is ever present Certainly not something to ignore Up in our brains we're still young as ever But the body's fallen way behind So don't you go thinking, that's not me I'm still young and able of mind What kind of flowers d'ya want on your coffin That's if you don't heed my warning It's not really a subject to make jokes about But it may help you see next morning When we're up in years, it's more on our mind It used to be way off in the future Then all of a sudden it starts getting closer Thinking about age, ain't so super So to hurry it along, keep shovelling snow You ain't a young pup anymore It's up to you if you wanna be a smart ass Maybe make out your will before © Jack Ellison 2014

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Date: 3/23/2014 10:25:00 PM
Hello my friend.....want me to bring my john deer tractor with big old scooping bucket on the front up there and clean that snow out of your drive? Have some of those tacos ready...
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/24/2014 7:00:00 AM
YES! And the tacos will be ready! WOO HOO! Cross your fingers, maybe we've seen the last of this white crap! Loving hugs, Jack XOXOX
Date: 3/23/2014 9:28:00 AM
So true Jack, that shoveling snow is no joke, I work in cardiovascular unit at a hospital, and that can really do some serious damage to your heart.. Good write.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/23/2014 5:33:00 PM
Hopefully we've seen the last of the snow till the fall but Mother Nature always like to surprise! Love ya Gwen! XOXOX
Date: 3/21/2014 10:55:00 AM
Oh.. this thought hit my heart so well, Jack :'O((.. turning 80??...you're still young to choose a flower for that ceremony.. :'( go ahead and shovel a snow macho man!! ..^__^ you remind me of my grandpa... :))) Thank you!! ^__^
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/21/2014 2:56:00 PM
oh,,, he's 85 now... and still kicking!!! lol... Happy weekend ,Jack!!! ..keep pushing!!!! ^__^
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/21/2014 11:00:00 AM
Awww! You are the sweetest, sweet lady! How old is your grandpa? Love you... XOXOX
Date: 3/21/2014 9:32:00 AM
I always shovel the snow, otherwise Hubby would do it! He's macho stubborn! Sigh! That's bad with his Diabetes. I can take all the long breaks I need. But Dragon always clears the way after his second breakfast... I don't let Dragon do the initial car dig out... The car might go up in a poof of smoke. Our insurance is high enough. Plus gasoline flames on my pretty little car, are not appealing. I'll let Dragon PAINT them on it later! it's way more fun to drive my cute car when it CAN run. LOL!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/21/2014 11:02:00 AM
My dear wifey Cathie shovels the snow here! I do get worried though... she's not as old as this old guy but she ain't young either. We will employ a contractor next year! XOXOX
Date: 3/21/2014 7:07:00 AM
Yes I agree with you wholeheartedly, you must take care of yourself and shoveling snow isn't the way to take care of yourself! But at my age you can shovel, unfortunately, I can't do it...I have a messed up arm, nerve damage. Anyway, at your age, I wouldn't recommend for you to shovel snow, I would like to have your great mind around for many more years my friend! What a wonderful poem this is, such a lovely piece, Great Work!!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/21/2014 11:06:00 AM
It's so easy to sit in a big old easy chair and watch TV! I'm currently walking about 20 minutes every day and I feel great! So hopefully you'll be stuck with me for a while yet! LOL

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