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What Keeps Us Awake

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To friendship and nightly conversations :)

While moon makes place for sun dark sky duvet pushed back stars close their eyes The restless few their beady eyes small marbles see all and everything hip ceaselessly don't find peace The intellectuals philosophize the dark away invent intricate solutions to external worldly problems and internal personal dark Morning light moves deep inside propped up on walls shines a soft glow that brings peace if only for a short while *** October 15, 2017 Copyright © Darren White

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Mick Talbot

Date: 11/7/2017 2:10:00 AM

Intellect is still extant, long live great poets! Peace for a day we accept, but forever, let us not stop hoping!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/21/2017 9:35:00 PM

I had to come read this again!!! I just had too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Darren White
Date: 10/23/2017 4:04:00 AM

Come read as often as you like <3

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/17/2017 11:15:00 PM

Now you have to know, I was gonna love this one!!! oh and what a compliment to us both! LOL :)

Darren White
Date: 10/18/2017 12:27:00 AM

I know :) Glad you like it

Tim Smith

Date: 10/16/2017 10:20:00 AM

Whatever peace we can get...those brilliant minds don't ever want to rest

Darren White
Date: 10/16/2017 1:59:00 PM

Yeah, you got it :)

Shmily Wang

Date: 10/15/2017 8:07:00 PM

It's our indifferent mentality with the desire for happiness and peace.The language is pure and profound,with imagination and thought-provoking.Tyvy,wish you all the best!

Darren White
Date: 10/16/2017 1:59:00 PM

Thank you so much :)

Sara Ella

Date: 10/15/2017 5:10:00 PM

You paint a picture - morning light bringing peace... this poem touches on the never ending voice at night. Nicely written <3

Darren White
Date: 10/16/2017 1:58:00 PM

Thanks Sara, love always <3

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 10/15/2017 3:40:00 PM

You make me smile. Clever poet, love your worded eye :) xomo

Darren White
Date: 10/16/2017 1:58:00 PM

Thanks ma mo <3

Shmily Wang
Date: 10/15/2017 8:07:00 PM

Yes,wish you all the best!

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 10/15/2017 3:10:00 PM

This is amazingly insightful and "dark sky duvet pushed back" is just gorgeous.

Darren White
Date: 10/16/2017 1:57:00 PM

Thanks Dale, that is a fine compliment :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/15/2017 9:49:00 AM

Great imagery for all the night birds, Darren (though I could never wake up the whole night for anyone happily)

Darren White
Date: 10/15/2017 9:52:00 AM

That's lucky, Jo :) Thank you.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/15/2017 5:56:00 AM

Owl see you in chat one day Darren!!!!! Wow that first stanza blew me away it is absolutely gorgeous and the poem got better and better my friend! Adding this to my faves I think the imagery is divine:-) hugs jan xx

Darren White
Date: 10/15/2017 6:30:00 AM

Thanks Jan :) I love that you love my poem, and thanks for the fav! And yeah, meet me in chat!