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What It Should Be

What It Should Be After I had awakened and then became dressed Read your poem and how much I was impressed Was so full of much spirit with vigor and vive Made my mind and being become totally alive. Might find a few misspellings' here and there Never really did matter and less could care You were venturesome in central theme With power and authority reigning supreme. Ideas formed, came together and did collect Things once loose now easily would connect Another thing about your poem I want to say Is that it should soon be Poem of the Day. James Serious Mysterious Horn Retired Veteran and Poet

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Date: 1/11/2016 1:55:00 PM
excellent write James, the couplet's great
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Date: 1/11/2016 5:38:00 PM
It is great knowing I am starting to get a reading clientele. Jim Horn
Date: 1/11/2016 8:52:00 AM
Really well executed couplet James! It wraps up PoetrySoup pretty well.
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Date: 1/11/2016 1:42:00 PM
MW. We both are definitely on the same wavelength. Jim Horn

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