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What It Seems; Seams Unraveled

I’m finally growing up; I realize Real eyes can recognize these real lies Lies he, in a landscape barren Bearin’ a false teachin’ he believed in. Deceived by these elders, he felt like the bait Bate the result as they betray the whole class of '08 Ate the lessons; trusted; left awed Odd how you long to go back, sidestep the façade. Fraud; caused his mind to alter Altar of this education abandoned; falter. Faltered, for as he appraised Praised then, all of the knowledge he gained. Drained; an opinion he lacks Lax for years but now he’s on track Track wisdom; has a mental axe Acts as a way to crash walls, fight back. Knack for writing, it became peace Piece of heart in each written-release Release stress; negative cease Sees in a new light, consciousness increased. Impeach his old ways and his mind state State his ideals through wordplay. Sure cliché, but this is my chance Chants that make a difference from my stance.

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Date: 7/23/2009 8:45:00 AM
(Road to Realization Parts I/II combined into one hehe)
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