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What Is What

What is what? I never thought, In my mind it always fought. When I asked the teacher to sort it out, She told to never ask such doubts. It runs in my mind throughout. When I asked my mother to sort it out, She said that she had the same doubt. But it runs in my mind throughout. When i asked my father to sort it out, He said that he is going out But it runs in my mind throughout. Someone help me to sort it out WHAT IS WHAT? Which I never thought.

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Date: 5/22/2022 3:28:00 AM
Good phrase to use for a poem. Of course, one can always look it up in the dictionary and you will get a nice definition. Sara
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 5/22/2022 3:30:00 AM
Yes! Thank you Sara for your comment! Have a great day!:)
Date: 5/15/2022 5:24:00 AM
Very clever. We all want to know what is what who is who where and when. this piece flows so well. I pray you have time to keep on getting better as poets are sorely needed to help get us through the times we live in. Best regards David in NZ
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 5/15/2022 9:07:00 AM
Thank you for your kind reply David! Yes ,I have been practicing poetry and styles more often as in my vacations...Have a great day:)
Date: 3/12/2019 5:03:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Komal.
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 1/20/2022 9:20:00 AM
Thank You!! Hope you liked my poem!
Date: 2/24/2019 4:51:00 AM
After reading ur poem...it is fun to think on and answer what is what????
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 1/20/2022 9:18:00 AM
I agree...It is an interesting question but I can't think of any answer to that! Well, Hope you liked the poem, I really appreciate you for commenting. Thank you!!
Date: 2/22/2019 1:54:00 PM
'What is What' to one is never the same for another. It's a definition you must decide for yourself.
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 2/22/2019 7:41:00 PM
I greatly appreciate u taking time to read my poem... I m also thank for ur suggestion.. Hope you liked it!
Date: 2/18/2019 8:14:00 PM
this is a good one... nicely written..
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 1/20/2022 9:19:00 AM
Thank You ,I really appreciate it!!
Date: 2/18/2019 6:13:00 PM
Hmm...I would go with "sort it out" rather than "sought". IMHO sought is a past tense, and it weakens the story. Makes it less immediate. Buy I could be wrong.
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 2/18/2019 9:08:00 PM
I greatly appreciate u taking time to read my poem... I m also thank for ur suggestion.. I will definitely keep this in mind for my future work...And I did edit it :)
Date: 2/18/2019 6:08:00 AM
Nicely rhymes
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 1/20/2022 9:19:00 AM
Thank You ,I really appreciate it!!
Date: 2/18/2019 6:06:00 AM
Nice One
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 1/20/2022 9:19:00 AM
Thank You ,I really appreciate it!!
Date: 2/16/2019 6:51:00 PM
Very clever. Welcome to PS.
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 2/18/2019 5:27:00 AM
Thank you!

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