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What Is This Space

What is this Space. What is this space, where I am in between This moment that I use, and then is cast Twix places I am going, and the many I have been This moment that is now, and then is passed What marvels have I missed in an eyes blink What words ignored whilst dreaming out the day So many, when, about it all, I think And now I want, to late, for gone are they Slipping by aloof, Times unseen wave He scatters treasures, both in blue and gold No promises along the way he gave Was up to me to take them and to hold So now I wake, the mind, the door, flung wide Though memories of the past I can’t replace I welcome blue and gold on rushing tide And no longer have too ask, what is this space.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2021 4:51:00 PM

I keep going all around your poems and can't find a new one to comment to, but thanks so much for seeing my poetry, Richard.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/4/2016 8:05:00 AM

The poem is a refreshing way of looking at life! Great one!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/31/2014 4:23:00 AM

Dear Mr Seal...Perhaps you might want to take another look at the last line of stanza two...Yes, you do TOO know why! ;) Also...an EYE'S blink is all it takes to know that this is just a superb poem. You are a wonderful poet.

Richard D Seal
Date: 2/14/2014 5:23:00 PM

Thanks for the tip off my little Desert Orchid.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/5/2013 3:37:00 PM

just here saying HELLO!!

Richard D Seal
Date: 8/5/2013 5:38:00 PM

Hello Petal, hello's are always nice, thank you

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 7/21/2013 10:55:00 AM

Grab and savor every moment, Richard. I like your phrase "Slipping by aloof. Times unseen wave." Good one, my friend. Licia :-)

Richard D Seal
Date: 8/5/2013 5:37:00 PM

It's hard to keep up sometimes Licia, but i do my best hehe hahaha

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/16/2013 4:35:00 PM

In answer to the question you posed below, how do I do it? soupmail.

Richard D Seal
Date: 7/16/2013 6:44:00 PM

Thank you, have read it,, very enlightening

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/10/2013 2:39:00 PM

wish I could find more poems of yours I have not seen!! Hope to see more new poems from you soon!

Richard D Seal
Date: 7/10/2013 7:33:00 PM

Hi Andrea, I am trying but keeping up with you is so hard. I do not know how you do it. Thanks for the push lol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/24/2013 1:31:00 AM

AHA I found one,and this is a gorgeous poem, Richard. Truly beautiful.

Richard D Seal
Date: 7/10/2013 7:34:00 PM

I didn't realise I hadn't replied to this super comment. Thank you very much. It is one of my faves.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/17/2013 9:00:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful, Richard. Very touching! Going to my favorites. BTW...thanks for your post on Hide and Seek! :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/4/2013 11:14:00 AM

love this one again... the meaning of two meaning.... Richard, thank you for taking your time, and amusing me with your nice and fun comments. I sure needed that when I logged on to the soup last night. xox~ Linda