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One of the saddest things I ever saw was a young girl literally torn away from a storefront window Christmas display.

She stares into the store window, All appreciation Of the finely wrought, The lovingly arranged, The beautifully colored Entrancingly lighted Welcoming scenes Of varied texture And inviting art, Of endless dreams. Harshly jerked away, "Get in the car, Sophie!" Roughly bundled into the carseat, The world is now the harried parent, And all the chores and rushing. A young child's reverie is like no other, And when broken, The universe loses a small, irreplaceable part, The next snow is made dirty, The next sunrise loses light.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/10/2019 3:04:00 PM
Ouch ~ this makes my heart hurt. Too nicely penned...
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Date: 9/10/2019 3:29:00 AM
Doug, your last stanza really brought things to "light" in the best way!
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Date: 3/17/2017 3:33:00 PM
Doug Doug Doug. I turned to this entry at random. How powerful expressive true and more much more. This is true to life and a fact of life. We as people see it over and over. And yes without saying and without a doubt "What is Lost". Allow me to say everything everything everything. Need I say more. Need you say more. This was powerfully expressed. Well done entirely.
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Date: 3/18/2017 8:42:00 AM
Lisa, I am truly touched by your comment. Wow.
Date: 12/4/2016 3:04:00 AM
Immense patience is one of the greatest gifts a parent can give a child.
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Date: 12/4/2016 9:03:00 AM
It still wasn't enough for my parents.... : p Ain't nobody on earth could have been always patient with me.
Date: 11/29/2016 7:34:00 AM
Wow, you are very talented indeed. This piece really touched me. The scene created brought a smile that was quickly replaced with a frown/puzzled gaze, but in a good way because this was so easily felt. You bring the reader into this world you create and seem to do so quite easily. Really nice Doug.
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Date: 11/29/2016 9:18:00 AM
Chris, you have my gratitude. Perhaps in the reading and writing of poetry we may become lost in the scene, like the little child.
Date: 11/22/2016 1:06:00 PM
Doug: I agree with 'Captain' Smith below. I have 10 grand kids and this struck a sympathetic cord with me as well. I suppose it happens every day but I just don't see it from my lawn chair out in front of the house. Keep them coming. oldbuck
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Date: 11/27/2016 1:45:00 PM
Old Buck, perhaps your chair and house are islands of serenity/sanity in an increasingly-rushed world? While some activities are certainly good, there are kids today with stuff scheduled every day of the week, and "soccer moms" and "soccer dads" ferrying them here and there. When do they get to be "just kids"?
Date: 11/22/2016 12:18:00 PM
Love your stuff Doug, welcome to the soup. Your prose is exceptional but this piece strikes a cord with me, thanks for sharing...
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Date: 11/27/2016 1:35:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie. 'Tis the season....

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