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What Is It With You

"What Is It With You?" And The Horrible Things That You Do. All The Same Old Problems Never End, Cause You Refuse To Take The Time- To Mend, Whatevers Going Wrong In Your Life. Describe You In 2 Words? That's Easy! ~Misery & Strife~ But I Know One Day, You'll Find, & Admit That The Quest For Nirvana, Really Isn't A Myth. Because Where Would You Run & Hide, When All Your Demons Burst From Inside. & Just Like "Christine" Un-Masked The "Phantom" You'll Find Your Fear Soon Turning Into Dis-Satisfaction. And Only Being What You Believed The World Had Wanted You To Be. But Why Do You Let Success Seem To Stress You? You See Life Dealing Another Bad Hand, Instead Of How Its Really Just Blessed You. So, Chalk It Up To Fear Of Success, Or You Dont You Think That You Would Do Your Best?~ When Challenged With One Of Life's Many Unexpected Test's Instead Of Confronting Them : Head-On, Optimistically, & With Zest Living With A Fervent Knowledge~ Or Belief To Know Were All Capable To Do Exactly What It Is ~We Put Our Minds To~

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Date: 11/16/2011 5:45:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Erin. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Erin Anderson
Date: 11/16/2011 8:45:00 PM
thank you very much!-
Date: 11/14/2011 6:52:00 AM
Lovely impressive write, Erin
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