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What Is

What is the young with out the old? What is the winter without the cold? What is the river without it's flow? What is a cheetah that moves too slow? What is a song that can not be sung What is bow that can not be undone What does us mean Without you and me?

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John Rhinem

Date: 12/26/2010 12:20:00 AM

Smile ~ "Soulful, Sweet & 'Beautiful Crystal;' Excellently Expressed Painting From The Heart!?" ~ "Keep Reaching & Brushing The Canvas' of Happiness & Hope" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You & Yours,' Always," John! ~ Smile, "Happy Holidays;" Bye!:) ~

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/25/2010 8:21:00 PM

wonderfully woven with a such sense of sensibilties, crystal!! amazing poet you are! huggs, nette :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/25/2010 3:42:00 PM

Love how you built up to that last line, Crystal! "what does us mean without you and me?" GREAT!!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/25/2010 1:46:00 PM

Good one..Enjoyed reading your work..Good questions that you asked..Sara