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What If It's True

How would you change? If it were all true. Heaven and Angels.. watching over you? Is there Paradise in ..the hereafter? Some just don't.. think things matter. What if Swarms of angels.. like butterflies. Came to earth..would you realize? That everything matters that life's the prize. How long will it take.. till you recognize.. What if the sun went dark. What if it were true? Would you change your ways? Have a new point of view? What if the Four horseman.. came galloping in? Would your conscience feel clear? Would you regret a sin? Our toys are just toys.. It's not about money. It's about loving each other.. and holding your honey. It's about time.. and what we do with it. Get up and dance.. or choose to sit. The choice is yours. So what will you do? Will you change your ways? What if it's true?

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/2/2015 7:30:00 PM

Hi Jennifer, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Love LINDA

Skat A

Date: 10/7/2014 11:48:00 AM

Jennifer, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Jennifer M.
Date: 10/7/2014 3:05:00 PM

SKAT A..Thanks a million! Glad you enjoyed poem. I've been a member of FFP Poetry site for a long time as well..I decided to join here to see if anyone else would enjoy my poetry. I am a Surgical Closer in the OR. I really enjoy my work. What do you do? I live in NY..upstate it's just beautiful here in the Fall. Thanks for reaching out to me and making me feel so welcome. Hope to hear from you soon. Take care. God Bless. Jennifer M.

Lawrence Biloni

Date: 10/6/2014 6:24:00 PM

Jenifer, the truth remains the same and u have said it all. i couldn't continue or leave but comment on your poem. i love it soo sooo much. your words are so intuitive. thanks and keep it up

Jennifer M.
Date: 10/7/2014 8:10:00 AM

Awww! Thank you! You are too kind. I appreciate your comments so much! They really made my day..Take care. Be blessed. -Jennifer

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/30/2014 6:26:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Jennifer- I choose your first very well written poem - I like it a lot - - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer M.
Date: 10/7/2014 8:07:00 AM

Nice to meet you as well. Thank you for the warm welcome! I'm so glad you enjoyed poem. Thanks for commenting.. much appreciated. Take care. Be blessed. -Jennifer

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/25/2014 6:27:00 PM

Jennifer, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Jennifer M.
Date: 9/25/2014 9:11:00 PM

Thanks so much for the warm welcome. I write a lot of poetry..but I am nervous to enter a contest..but I'll consider it..really appreciate the offer. I'm surprised I have so many reads on my poems already. I look forward to reading some of your poems as well. Thanks again. Jennifer