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What If

What if the world was something we could never see what if me and you were something that could never be what if our ears could never hear a single sound what if when we died we didn’t go in the ground what if the words were simply if what what if we could explain girls without using **** what if we simply stopped using all profanity would we all go crazy or die from insanity? what if you reading this is all just a dream what if every word i said i didn’t really mean what if when we heard a joke we never ever laughed what if we never cried because we never got sad what if i didn’t do that at all or didn't do it wrong what i never found music and made this song what if poetry never crossed my mind? ask yourself what if and see what you find I love rhyming poems that are potentially lyrical, but the repetition as well to make the reader think a little bit. No minimum or maximum amount of lines just the two things I mentioned.

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Date: 12/14/2015 11:27:00 PM
JASON, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/14/2015 2:12:00 PM
Hi Jason, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7 (which is the highest score you can get or receive)! Pandita
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Date: 12/14/2015 12:41:00 PM
Jason, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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