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What If

What if the universe doesn't conspire? Will your world revolve around me? What if my heart stops beating? Will you still say that you care? What if I could turn back the time? Will our paths cross again? What if miracles don't exist? Will you still believe and hope that everything is real? What if fate connects us together? Do you think you're destined for me? What if.....

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Helen Grace Balisi

Date: 9/5/2014 10:21:00 PM

Thank you for your warm welcome and appreciating my poem. You inspire me more to write!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/5/2014 2:05:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Helen - I choose your first great written poem "What if " - You write skillfully - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/5/2014 11:48:00 AM

Hi Helen, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/5/2014 10:00:00 AM

Excellent write - great question! A warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Helen! Happy writings! Pandita

Jan Allison

Date: 9/4/2014 5:19:00 PM

What if is a question we can all ask at some times in our life... great deep write:-) i hope you find the answer to what if. Hugs Jan xxx