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What If? When we were young it was a familiar friend Always with us as we looked with wonder Everything seemed possible, nothing out of reach Dreams were wonders filled with possibilities. Before we were afraid of the truth,when we were still honest Open to unseen possibilities Unconcerned with the opinions of others We were free to imagine. No boundaries to compel us to conform No expectations of group commonality We were entranced by the largeness of creation Giddy with excitement that we had a part to play. But then the expectations of others made our light go dim Putting heavy weights on our once joyful shoulders Causing them to droop with the shame of perceived failure No longer seeing life looking back in the mirror We have lost our identity, trading it for sameness Our imagination replaced with logic No longer alive to beauty, no longer filled with hope Overwhelming joy and anticipation replaced by a blank stare. What if we chose to turn around? To believe that what was lost could be found What if we chose to believe that what was taken has been restored by grace What if our joy and imagination returned? What if?

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Date: 8/26/2014 1:16:00 AM
We tend to live in a world of 'What IF.' Nice one. Experiences changes our perception and we tend to look at the brighter side. Congrats to the feature. Regards, Bhavna
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John Brooks
Date: 8/26/2014 5:47:00 AM
Thank you Bhavna.
Date: 8/20/2014 7:00:00 PM
Mine has and some may think I am way out there, but I don't expect to please everyone, I just write what comes to me. We have a tendency to try to fit in, but I do feel that aging helps to free us of that. Great write!
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Date: 8/18/2014 11:22:00 AM
Beautiful, powerful, inspirational write about serious life questions . A warm welcome to PoetrySoup, my friend. Best wishes and happy writings! Pandita
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Date: 8/18/2014 8:17:00 AM
Anne, thank your for your words of encouragement. I'm really glad you enjoyed those thoughts. Best Regards, John
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Date: 8/18/2014 7:26:00 AM
Lots of great questions! Welcome to poetry soup john!
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John Brooks
Date: 8/18/2014 8:15:00 AM
Thank you Casarah. I really appreciate your encouraging words.
Date: 8/18/2014 3:44:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,John - I choose your first very well written free verse : "What if ?" - I like it - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- P-Soup Rule: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/17/2014 9:55:00 PM
You are welcome John, I'm on my way to open a new contest.. Linda
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Date: 8/17/2014 9:46:00 PM
A good question John, What If???? ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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John Brooks
Date: 8/17/2014 9:49:00 PM
Thank you Linda for your kind words and the opportunity to be in your contest. Blessings, John

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