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What if, I could not see, would you sight the tree of life, for my being beauty, against the nurtured lands. What if, I could not hear, would you listen, to the calmness, of the sea, to break it through. What if, I could not touch, would you be, my hands, of a soft silky pillow, to embrace me. What if, I could not walk, would you be, that crutch, under- wing, to head me to triumph, along the sand, one on one. What if, I could not cry, would you, shed my tears, among yours, to drown them, in a whirl-pool. What if, I had A broken heart, would you be, the one to heal, it's pain, and nurse it back to health, with a band aid. What if, I was hungry, would you be, the one to feed, this starving soul, in A hopeful need, to guidance. Just what if, I say to let it, all go, and hand Jesus the wheel... NUFF LUV to everyone who's doubted The power of our Lord Jesus Christ, for he Is Our rock, and savior to everlasting life, I adore thee....Amen Carma Reed June 3rd, 2012

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Date: 12/8/2012 8:15:00 PM
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 12/8/2012 8:45:00 PM
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Date: 11/23/2012 5:59:00 PM
Amen and yes He will! Really well expressed.
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 12/8/2012 8:47:00 PM
Yes amen Richard thank you for the comment always love Carma
Date: 11/11/2012 2:59:00 PM
Oh, it's very beautiful, Carma. You have a sweet spirit. Tender. Love it. Great write. So enjoyed!! Love ya, Toquyen
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 11/11/2012 7:32:00 PM
Thank You my dear Toquyen loved, loved your comment love always Carma
Date: 11/11/2012 11:42:00 AM
It had hosted a sad life Carma ..... without all the senses we have. - (But it is amazing to see how someone who is blind or deaf can use the senses that we never use.) - A good poem - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 11/11/2012 7:30:00 PM
Thank You My Dear Anne Lise, is very sad how we all sometimes take things for grant it, when there's ppl less fortunate... Was very touched by your comment thanks. Love always Carma
Date: 11/11/2012 11:36:00 AM
I absolutely love this poem, spool great, and our Lord and Savior is great and greatly to be praised. God bless
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 11/11/2012 7:19:00 PM
Thank You Gwen, God Bless You Too

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