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What If

What if we could live beyond the realms of our imaginations? Surpassing our thoughts to a world of pure gratification What if we could swim within seas of endless possibilities? To a place where I submit unto you, so willing to please What if you climbed my mountains of complete satisfaction? And I mounted upon your wings caressing clouds of passion What if you and I dwelled beyond what ifs and what could be? Where nothing stood between us, where there were no boundaries What if we occupied the same place at the very same time? What if I was completely yours, could you be completely mine?

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Date: 4/11/2012 2:31:00 AM
A little mushy but very eloquently done. Your good, please continue, I'm litsening.
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Date: 4/2/2012 4:23:00 AM
And I mounted upon your wings caressing clouds of passion
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Date: 4/1/2012 7:23:00 PM
what IF I ain't seen my friend ChickYtuH for a Minute YO! Then what! What! YO! Tell a Krackuh Lackuh who u beeeee with!?? where u IZ! I ask u/////WHERE THE Poet TREES at ....Gimmeee SOme MO! BustaR.
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Date: 3/25/2012 10:04:00 PM
You use words so freely and smooth. I just love it. Everything you say or write just goes together. I love it girl. Very nice write. Keep up the good work girl. Hope to read more from you.
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Date: 3/14/2012 2:27:00 PM
Smile ˜ What If One Had The Faith of A Mustard Seed & Eyes Which Did Not Strain At Knats Nor Mouths That Did Not Swallow Camels? ˜ Could Your Precious Beauty Imagine The Potential Splendours That Could Be Born Then? * My Love, John!:) ˜
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Date: 3/14/2012 2:14:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Baity -very charming -very well written. I,ll add it to one of my favorites. -Mohammad
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Date: 3/14/2012 2:07:00 PM
Yes, it is the big question Chiguita:"What If"??? - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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