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What If?

What if the things they told me, Had really been true? What if there had been a chance, Of something with me and you? What if, instead of with her, You were with me? Would that even happen? How would that be? What if I told you, How I really feel? What if I said it? Would the dreams become real? All of these questions, Answers we may never know. Final question, what would’ve happened, If I’d let my love for you show?

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Date: 7/26/2010 4:24:00 PM
I like you poem a lot of what ifs. these are question as always ask our selves and end ip with alot of i should haves. Cool write and welcome to the soup
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Date: 7/26/2010 4:46:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Tiffany. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/26/2010 1:34:00 AM
Smile ~ Well, perhaps they would have and possibly not; felt the same for Yourself that is? I guess it just depends on, is there anyone else within their lives whom they love more? Smile, are You looking for love? Smile, 1-800-"666" ~ Smile, just having fun! I like Your style! "Love Always," John!:) ~
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Date: 7/25/2010 6:47:00 PM
Nicely expressed words in this free verse. Best wishes and love.....Ravindra.....Tiffany Gray
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Date: 7/25/2010 4:29:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your very creative write tonight.. with luv..
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