What If

What if the sun was to not rise What if the world would not turn What if today was our last Would you have regrets Would you have unfinished business What if you had one day left How would you finish

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Ashley Yates

Date: 7/5/2009 8:06:00 AM

What if...? It really gets you thinking.... Great write!

Diane Christian

Date: 5/23/2009 1:40:00 AM

I enjoyed this poem a lot, it just a case of when, that what if is a when for the day is near, this is going on my fave list it is beautiful because I know Jesus will be ehre sooner than we all think, live every day as the last, you just never know when our Lord will appear. God bless you

Diane Christian

Date: 5/23/2009 1:37:00 AM

a great poem a great question, i would say Amen for that day I will see God and Jesus to return I live for that day to come, it wont be the end it will be just the begining of a new era with Jesus, he will return for it is written, so again I say Amen, bring it on for then we will truly see paradise no more pain no sufereing, no more tears no more hurts so Amazing , God bless you from diane