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What I Would Give For a Scrumptious Cookies

Jimmy sits restlessly on a cane bottom chair at the kitchen table In grandma’s kitchen smelling the fresh sweet aroma of her cooking and baking What is that beautiful scent his nose has detected as he gazes towards the counter where sits a plain old fashion green almost round cookie jar with a raised word “Cookies” on it In deep studious thought he slumps staring and wondering about what kind of cookies are in the jar With drool at the corner of his mouth, he sees visions of Chocolate Chip and Peanut Butter cookies that grandma took first place at the county fair Just one cookie would satisfy this rumbling in my belly But mom says no that it would spoil my dinner Maybe its those yummy Gingersnaps with a little brown sugar that are so heavenly It could be Oatmeal Raisin, Sugar, or Lemon Macaroon Cookies they are all wonderful I sure would love to have just one Grandma wouldn’t mine she lets me have anything because I’m her favorite If I snuck just one, nobody would know Mother would, she always does when I do something wrong It must be the expression on my face that gives me away My dog always licks up any crumbs I drop on the floor So it can’t be that What's wrong with the clock it must be broken, the little hand hasn’t moved and the big hand is moving like molasses Molasses, I love Molasses cookies could it be them Oh, what wouldn’t I give for a couple of scrumptious cookies I wish that little voice in my head would quit telling me to get a cookie Even a Macaroon would satisfy my hunger I hear footsteps “No, Mother I am not getting into the cookie jar, I am washing my hands and I haven't thought about the cookies at all.” 11/25/2014 by roper

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Date: 3/15/2015 1:36:00 PM
How lovely and entertaining, Eve!! A child is always a child...we know how it works, we've been there!! I see that this is a winner...so congratulation! All the best. // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 3/15/2015 2:49:00 PM
You are not the only one:)
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/15/2015 1:59:00 PM
Paul, thank you, I guess I'm still a child because I still have those cravings
Date: 3/10/2015 5:39:00 PM
I'm ravenous for a cookie now Eve - what a delightful write - you delved deep into a child's mind for the final couplet - not sure if i could keep my hand out the cookie Jar - sounds too tempting! congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/11/2015 5:29:00 AM
Oh I couldn't possibly give recipe secrets out lol - i tend to buy biscuits now rather than bake lol:-) Hugs Jan x
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/10/2015 6:17:00 PM
Thank you, Jan, secretly I need your help to tell me what these are. Thank you dear friend hugs and love Eve
Date: 3/9/2015 4:20:00 PM
Eve, Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog "BEGINNINGS" if you'd like. Hope you are having a Wonderful Day, thank you for supporting my contest -Always & Forever- LINDA
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/10/2015 6:06:00 PM
Thank you, Linda, this is a surprise, love and hugs Eve
Date: 11/27/2014 8:02:00 AM
Totally delightful write, I could relate to Jimmy's pain. Now I need to find some cookies *lol*. Unfortunately I don't have Jimmy's will power.
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/27/2014 8:40:00 AM
Ha, Ha, Richard, I am so happy you enjoyed the poem. May you and yours have a wonderful, blessed Thanksgiving :) eve
Date: 11/26/2014 12:27:00 PM
Now this sounds like me. Cookies are wonderful and scrumptious Eve. What a yummy poem, James :)
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/26/2014 4:13:00 PM
James,there always lots of them in our home. Thank you for stopping by and enjoying the poem. Have a wonderful Thanksgiving and a blessed day eve
Date: 11/26/2014 12:03:00 AM
hahaha, you captured the mind of a young child. it also sounds like what must be going through the mind of our new puppy dog as he watches us eating. he just won't stop yapping. Good one. I love Xmas cookies.
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/26/2014 4:10:00 PM
Andrea, now you know where the cookie crumbs are going, into your puppy dogs tummy . Thank you for stoping by and enjoying the poem. Have a wonderful Thanksgiving and a blessed day eve
Date: 11/25/2014 10:21:00 PM
"Eat Words and Drink Poetry" I gained 10 lbs just reading your poem! Keep writing!
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/25/2014 10:43:00 PM
Haha.. Well, at least it's the type you won't gain too much, with this cookie there fat free, no calories. Thank you so much for stopping by and visiting Chaim, and your delightful comment. Blessings to you and Have a nice Thanks Giving: eve

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