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What I Thought You Were

The things you said made me laugh but now only make me cry, I used to think that being with you would make me happy once again, but now I see that being with you isn't everything being with the one who truly loves me will be the only make thing that will make my heart sing what I thought you were isn't what you are you are not I how wanted you to be and now I know that you aren't my prince charming I hope someone else can love you even if i truly can't -love heartbroken hay

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Date: 12/17/2013 10:20:00 PM
Haley, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 12/4/2013 3:54:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Haley ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/4/2013 1:51:00 AM
Haley, this is beautifully written, deep and truthful. wishing that broken heart well. , I like your first poetic piece on the site , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/3/2013 7:19:00 PM
Beautiful! Tis The Way It Should Truly Be; Love Beyound Their Night ~ Love John
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Haley Ellis
Date: 12/3/2013 8:33:00 PM
thx for the comment

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