What I Saw

I watched you walk into my life with grace, I watched you dress in black satin and lace... I watched your beauty come out, I watched you dance all about... I watched your tears roll like a stream, I watched you reach high for your dream... I watched you from far and near, I watched you from my life disappear. For "An old or new" contest sponsored by Brian Strand.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/6/2012 8:50:00 AM

Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week George. Love, Carol

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/2/2012 10:39:00 PM

Your poem is featured this week. It's a good one with great rhyming.

Tirzah Conway

Date: 1/2/2012 12:57:00 PM

Well as the saying goes - Easy come Easy go, it's sad to see love leaving but on a happier note congrats on this great poem being featured this week!!Tirzah~

Troy Gamble

Date: 1/2/2012 1:04:00 AM

Couldn't relate more to my life right now then the part with the disappear great poem

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 7/16/2011 8:56:00 AM

Congratulations George on your first place win this this lovely write. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/14/2011 8:30:00 AM

wow, congrats on your top win,george! :) huggs

John Freeman

Date: 7/14/2011 7:48:00 AM

George, Great job, Congratulations on your first place. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/14/2011 5:27:00 AM

Congrats George on your first place win with these awesome words my friend.. enjoy with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/14/2011 5:16:00 AM

Congratulations George on your win in the "A Old Or New" contest sponsored by Brian Strand. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/15/2011 3:02:00 PM

oh,my goodness. How did I miss this beauty? I just found my fave for the day!!

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/9/2011 12:10:00 PM

A bit of melancholy, George. But always remember and take heart... hope lives in the hearts of those who believe in love..there is always a tomorrow! So try to smile, my friend. Thanks for the soup mail and you are very welcome. Will read more of your poems. Always, Audrey

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 1/8/2011 6:27:00 PM

Nice poem....Jimmy

Christine A Kysely

Date: 1/8/2011 4:48:00 PM

Lovely...REALLY lovely!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/8/2011 12:24:00 PM

Sad write my friend... Everything is for a reason I was always told... In time you realize its true... best to you......Michael