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What I Love About You

verse 1 numb feelings painted ceilings fast healings sealed dealings so appealing is what I love about you what I love about you smooth fashion hearts passion foods rations looks dashing eyes flashing is what I love about you what I love about you your love potion your blue oceans those nod notions hip motions smell of baby lotion is what I love about you what I love about you azure skies mystical eyes shapely thighs wispering cries tells me why is what I love about you what I love about you verse 2 for it comes as no suprise as it opened up my eyes makes me just want to reach out to that sky and pull you close and near by for this I'll tell you why is what I love about you is what I love about you verse 3 for you make me feel so high when I know your standing close by take my hand lord for I am very shy and I promise I won't cry and for this you'll know why is what I love about you is what I love about you Tribute To Christ Our Lord {Amen}

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Date: 1/9/2010 5:46:00 AM
I do like this one, you write well, that isnt in question. I look for depth, esp. emotions.
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Date: 10/29/2009 11:41:00 AM
This is a very good poem good job I really enjoyed reading this
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Date: 9/13/2009 11:15:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry today Katherine. I have enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/12/2009 8:48:00 AM
Hey, great tribute, I love the flow of words, what a wonderful lyric. Great you Kate! Adeleke
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Date: 9/12/2009 8:29:00 AM
This read like a great song, Katherine, so I was not surprised when I read our note at the end. There is a pop song "What I Like about You," but yours has much more depth. Creative form and great rhyme scheme as well. Excellent work! Love, Carolyn
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