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What I Gave

What I gave Was a hand of friendship When all seemed lost A small ray of hope When on a rubbish tip was tossed A way out of a problem When not a penny to his name A chance, a hope of a tomorrow When thoughts of ending it came What did I get in return More than the money that I gave Was a friend, not a scrounger Who from this small deed A new life and family has obtained Was just money to me To him was a moment when he knew someone cared (I believe in the saying. If he doesn't come he sends) Penned 20/06/2014

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Date: 7/14/2014 1:36:00 PM
Wonderful experience and write, Seren. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 7/14/2014 11:19:00 AM
You r so right Seren! Yes he sends ,, friends ,, congrats on huge win!
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Date: 7/4/2014 9:23:00 PM
You are a true friend Seren, You heart shines through you words...hugs Tim
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