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what I feels

I just wonder,
What the magic you have.
Just next to my heart,
You beat the love rhythm.

I don’t know how to live?
Till the time I gains you.
Even the tears that flows down the eyes,
Bears pain of you.

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  1. Date: 10/23/2011 9:04:00 PM
    wyah! wyah! I love a slow love song when it is not about me..cheer up....thoughtful piece of write-^up! Look's like you have got the corner on misery covered.....your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS HA.HA.HE.HE.!

  1. Date: 10/2/2011 9:18:00 AM
    I forgot to rate this sweet poem..

  1. Date: 10/2/2011 9:17:00 AM
    This is emotionally romantic ! I liked this...I hope u get what u desire

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    Date: 10/3/2011 7:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    well, thnx for your luck for getting my desire. really feels appreciated by your lovely comment smriti ji. takecare and do visiting by my page.