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What I Feel

Its so empty and feel so sick Inside I fel my body has left me standing as still as air My tears show so much I can't hide my tears any more They fall like a running stream Tears and tears just keep on falling It hurts to much Its all you can do Is to cry, No one knows how I feel they see the outside not the Inside I can never give up my fight for survival,the pain will never go away Your aim Is to let know one destroy you But some how It happens love Is a messy **** full thing You really know when your are In love It really hurts.

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Date: 2/28/2024 5:58:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/5/2016 3:52:00 PM
GAEL, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Always with LUV ** LINDA
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